Showing posts with label outline. Show all posts
Showing posts with label outline. Show all posts

Friday, January 29, 2016

"The Diamond Necklace" Review

If there was a chart of the progress of the plot with the symbols/themes, it would look like this:

Matilda is unhappy because she believes that she is too beautiful to be in rags (This means that there will be a rich versus the poor theme).

The husband expects her to be happy to go to a lavish party, but the exact opposite happens.  Matilda is unhappy because she does not have a fancy dress and jewels to wear among the rich women (Matilda believes that the only way she can ever be happy is to have fancy materialistic things).

The husband gives her money that he saved for himself to his wife so she could buy a fancy dress.  Matilda is still not satisfied, so she borrows a necklace from her friend (Matilda does not appreciate her husband’s gift and presses further because greed is coming in).

When she goes to the party, she feels like she is the life and queen of the party.  When her husband puts a wrap around her, because he cares for her well-being, she runs away because she would look bad with it.  All the rich ladies have fancy shawls (This scene shows through the images of a lavish party and the sounds of music that this was what Matilda was hoping for.  She believes that someone as beautiful as her should deserve this type of lifestyle.  This is where the theme of beauty makes a powerful entrance).

 Along the run, she loses the necklace and writes to her friend that she will give it back to her after fixing a clasp that broke from it (She loses the very thing that made her beautiful).

Matilda and her husband spent a fortune on buying a new diamond necklace after they found one like it.  They had to work hard for ten years to pay off the debt (Here, through the descriptive narration, it is shown that Matilda has worked hard for ten years.  This is a parallel to what society must learn.  Money does not come easily.  Hard work is involved).

After the ten years, Matilda became the opposite of a beautiful woman and was crude.  Her friend, when she ran into her, was still beautiful and young.  She even had a child.  Matilda told her friend the true story, only to find out that the necklace was a fake.
                                                        

The ending of the narrative symbolizes that Matilda’s thirst for materialistic objects made her the exact opposite of the beautiful women that she once was.  Her friend, with the fake diamonds, remained young and beautiful because she did not care for real diamonds and materialistic objects.  This is the irony at the end of the story.  Since the story is told in Matilda’s point of view, it gives an insight to why she was feeling the way she is.  The denouement in the plot is not satisfying, and it does not provide closure to the narrative.  The story was sad but hilarious at the same time.

Friday, October 9, 2015

Procrastinate on a 10 page paper?

How I (cough.you.cough) can deal with writing 10 page papers in under 5 hours...WHAT?

Well....okay so some of you guys could probably finish faster, but I type slow...so yeah.
Also...do not do this all the time.
It is a VERY BAD habit, which I have.
Wow that's a long title...got any better ideas?

So, this process works for me, and I encourage you guys to at least try it...wait, no, DO NOT try it.  You should be doing your paper at a steady pace throughout the assigned period.

-To start off the process right, find a comfortable, but not too comfortable place to sit for the full 5 hours.  This place should receive little to no cell phone service.  Just kidding.  Self control is KEY.

-Next, make sure you have A water bottle and A snack.  There is an emphasis on "A' because that usually describes a quantity of ONE.  Gorging does not fit into this process.

-Have a notebook, pens, pencils, dictionary, charger, ETC.  This means think of ANY materials you MIGHT need for this assignment.  It does not matter if you use it.  The KEY is to not get up for ANYTHING. Ahem, so make sure you make a full bathroom stop before you start.

-NEXT, spend some time on an outline.  I know, you guys must be thinking, "WHAT, this girl's crazy!  I don't need an outline!  I've got skills!" OR "WHAT, is she deaf?  Did she not hear that I need to write this paper in FIVE HOURS?"  Did you get that out of your system?  Yes?  Okay good.

-NEXT, spend some time (1 hour the least) on an outline.  I was not joking.  Making an outline helps so much, it's not even funny anymore.  The more detailed your outline is the faster you can write 10 pages OR EVEN MORE!  Yes, more!  If you guys want to know more about making an outline, put it in the comments and let me know!  I'll make a separate post for that!

-Let's go back to the process!  Once you have created your wonderfully detailed outline, write your body paragraphs.  Yes.  Often, an individual (me) has trouble writing an introduction and a thesis statement.  So, save those for last if you would like.

-Once you have written your body paragraphs (reference your outline as you write), stop and take a snack break.  You deserve it, as you got the biggest pain (I mean portion) out of the way for now.

-NOTE: the snack break should take no more than 15 minutes!

-After the little break, write your conclusion.  I know, I am backwards.

-Now, the moment you've all been waiting for...

-You can finally write the best introductory paragraph of all time and the awesomest thesis statement!  YES!  Awesomest IS NOT a word.  However, by the time you are done the entire essay, your brains are going to be fried.  What do I know though?  All I can say mine is always dead.  It's probably because of the lack of sleep...

-The final step is to proofread and press the turn in button!

-Congratulations!  You have procrastinated, and will probably do it again because it's in your nature!
-I am joking.  There are good reasons out there!  Somewhere...

-I hope this helped at least a few readers!  If you have any questions, comments, or would like more explanations regarding these steps (or anything), please do not hesitate to comment and let me know!

-Have a great day!
-Oh!  Please enjoy these cartoons I found on the internet!